The article “Sioux Treaty of 1868” related an agreement has been achieved between Native Americans and settlers from western American and Europeans after many conflicts. The U.S government admitted the northern territories including the Black Hills belong to Indians. But later on they regretted because the writes found gold in the Black Hills then the conflicts began again.
If I am a soldier, I am pound of it. Sioux is a great person and he is a leader of our army. What I can do for our army in only fight with western United States Americans and Europeans. I will try my best. I join the army with my whole loyalty. God bless us!
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November 17, 2009 at 2:28 am
I think you can add some important point in the summary. Maybe you miss something.
November 17, 2009 at 3:37 am
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November 17, 2009 at 5:50 am
Maybe you can make this summary more clearly.
November 17, 2009 at 5:53 am
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November 19, 2009 at 12:34 am
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November 21, 2009 at 8:59 am
It is interesting. You image in a different way.
November 29, 2009 at 6:29 pm
I don’t think you know who the Sioux are. Your post makes me think you think it was a person rather than a group of people and that they were soldiers.