According to the article“Photographs and Pamphlet about Nuclear Fallout”, it said that a new dreadful weapon called atomic bombs killed people by two ways; Two superpowers, United States and Soviet Union, proceeding arms race via atomic bombs； The fallout from nuclear explosions is bad for citizens in the country, so people are finding techniques to protect themselves.
From this article, I remember some stories I have heard when I was young. If you quickly glance the light issued by atomic bomb explosions, your eyes will be blind. The fallout will exit many years, it can clause a lot of diseases. Today，there are many abnormal children in Japan. The radioactive elements can continue to harm people as long as 50 years or more. The atomic bombs are really dreadful.
December 1, 2009 at 9:04 pm
I think you miss some information in your summary. Like United States and Soviet Union competed each other and created new weapons all the time.
December 2, 2009 at 12:23 am
You describe it good, but it still exists some problems. You need to work hard to improve it!
December 2, 2009 at 1:35 am
I think you need to be write more imformations about the nuclear fallout.For example,it hazards and the two superpowers want to power than others.
December 2, 2009 at 2:19 am
I chose the same article. So, I agree Cici’s opinion. You lost some information in your summary. In additional, the opinion” people are finding techniques to protect themselves. “wasn’t appeared in the article.
December 2, 2009 at 2:26 am
I like your thought. but I think the summary can be better.
December 2, 2009 at 8:22 pm
I agree with other lovely classmates. Maybe youcan talk about more information about this paper. It will be better.